The sort of locations that I picture our video taking place in, are places such as festivals, beaches, gigs. We are planning to film when we go to the Latitude festival, and on holiday as it will match the theme and idea of our whole concept. I would like to include a few close-up camera shots of random objects or landscapes and use them as a sort of transition between settings or scenes. During filming our performance, I would like to also use close-ups of the instruments and the performers faces. I think this will make it seem realistic and believable. I think tilted camera angles would also be quite effective during the performance scenes, to create a sense of play. We would like to have a fairly quick editing style between each shots and add affects such as sepia or old-style to create a vintage, summery feeling. We are inspired to use such affects by Foster The People's video 'Pumped Up Kicks' and many others such as 'She Moves In Her Own Way' by the Kooks - which uses lots of different shots and scenery like we plan to use. The people we choose to appear in our video will be dressed casually as typical teenagers. For example, t-shirts, skinny jeans, hoodies. I can picture our video being full of colour, so I think this will be something we would like to portray as a representation of teenagers. Lots of different colours in our shots will create a sense of wildness and emotions, which occur in the everyday life of teenagers.
Our target audience will be people between the age of16-22, and we will appeal to this target by relating aspects of our video to real life situations and using actors of the same age to appear in the footage, in order for our audience to relate to it and be drawn into the video. This will also make the film seem more believable and the audience can perhaps put themselves into the actor’s shoes and be inspired by the concepts of our video.
There are some good details and ideas in here Hattie but you need to express the ideas with more conviction. "We are hoping that our music video will consists of video footage of a performance. This performance will be of people we know who are willing to act and mime instruments in our video, as the track we are using isn’t of a band that are easy to get hold of to appear in our video." This is a very hesitant opening to the treatment. Rephrase along the lines of "The performance element of our music video is key to the concept and will be filmed ... " also don't include doubts about your actors being reluctant to mime etc. Avoid the word random ... even if your montage of summer shots connotes spontaneity ... it shouldn't be random but well planned and intended as part of the concept. "We also had ideas ..." write in the present ... treatment is written prior to filming.
ReplyDeleteWill the target audience relate to the teenage representations in the video or be inspired by them? Are these different?